I get the point being made, but honestly a lot of this reads as...
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Isabel Rayn
Answered 9 months ago
I see the point you're making, but to be honest, some of this feels a bit muddled or too detailed. It might be more effective if the main ideas were highlighted more clearly, or if it were condensed to focus on the most important aspects. A little more clarity could make the message much easier to follow.
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